Ollie Firedrake's Introduction

5th Year Posts : 2 Join date : 2014-09-03

Name: Ollie Firesnout
Age: Fifteen
Year: Fifth year
Blood type: Pure Blood
Where are you from: North- Eastern Australia

Physical Description (about 5 lines):
Towering over others at 6 foot 4 inches and broad shoulders is the Caucasian giant, Ollie Firesnout who casts a shadow others would fear to tread. Despite his large stature he has a remarkably honest face with large laughing blue eyes streaked with red and gold. His wide mouth is circled by pale red lips that curve into a easy smile and pull open to show a fine set of teeth with slightly sharper canines than normal. His thick curly light brown hair is cut short on the sides with more at the front to cover his somewhat large forehead but out of his eyes. He has a distinctive scar trailing from the right side of his bottom lip to his chin and maintains a twin dragon gold/silver earring and hidden under his clothes secretively are tattoos covering his shoulders and upper back out of the both teachers and students sight alike. Looking further down the perceptive will notice callused and tough hands but well looked after, with not to long to be annoying but not to short as to not be useful finger nails. Further up usually well hidden forearms are crisscrossed thin delicate scars going up his arms. His skin is tanned a light olive colour showing some time spent in the sun but not excessively, and fine white body hair covering his arms and powerful legs. His body is covered in evidence of daily physical labour and the handling of hard rough materials as seen in the tiny scars over his fingers from numerous cuts both recent and ancient.

Psychological Description (about 10 lines):
Ollie Firesnout at first impression would appear to be a overly cheerful and none to thoughtful student that laughs and smiles easily, getting along with a variety of people no matter the differences in school or age, teacher or student. Looking deeper few would realise he hides many secrets and although easy to talk to he usually maintains a certain distance. Furthermore he always wears long clothes that hide most of his exposed skin except for his hands and face even in the roasting heat of summer or the privacy of the dorms. His supposed day dreaming is rather deep thought as he looks at a situation from multiple perspectives both morally and for the greater benefit of others around him, especially the few he would call friend. Why he gets along with others so well is his admiration for those around him and the skills they posses, however when threatened Ollie takes a different side. his eyes will grow larger and carry a dangerous glint, as if a barely restrained fury is bubbling to the surface. To those who are his friend he is a constant worry with no care of his personal safety and a reliable rock for others to both rest on and find protection as there is little to nothing he would not do for the sake of anthers welling. His most noticeable flaw however is his belief in doing what is right no matter what rules he may break in the process.

Story (about 15 lines):
Hailing from north-eastern Australia Ollies background and history is mostly unreliable as he has little intention of sharing the true series of event that landed him at Hogwarts. However it is known that he was driven from Australia due to a dragon related incident and caused him to be send to Hogwarts for training and furthermore is the cause behind his red gold eyes and scar on his chin. Many rumours circulate his background however despite his friendly easy going attitude he keeps himself out of sight for many hours of the day. However if there is ever a rainy day you will always find Ollie in the same place, at the top of the dungeon tower with his feet over the edge and soaked by rain, staring off into the distance, a small fire in his hands, warming him gently. He is a gifted hand, cookery and sleeping standing and has a natural affinity for fire based spells with reports of even wordless spells being cast. This has further escalated his mysterious background to even support wild stories of how he stole a dragons fire by eating its heart. These rumours started during Ollies 3rd year when a Slytherin assaulted a Ravenclaw first year with a curse and ended with a third of the courtyard grounds to be burned black, the Slytherins' immediate withdrawal from the school and a humble fan club that quickly died due to intervention from Professor Snape. Precise details of the incident are sketchy at best but involve a pillar of fire and a mass breakout of sunburns. After a three month suspension Ollie returned and with a adoring Girlfriend, a request to join the Quidditch team as a beater (which he politely refused) and rather smug smile every time he passed the courtyards ( Furthermore most Slytherins tend give him a wide birth after the indecent for several months with the exception of Draco Malfoy who is too proud to do otherwise). Two years later and still together with his girlfriend Ollies fame proved short term as he once again lives a somewhat school life (if you ignore the previous events of the last 4 years) and now prepares for his OWLS and ponders his future career almost sleepily.

Wished house: Hufflepuff

Password: ok Smile

Subject: Re: Ollie Firedrake's Introduction Wed Sep 03, 2014 9:09 am

Your story, physical and psychological descriptions are good! However there are a few little things I would like you to edit before the sorting hat can announce your house. First change your age or the year you are in. If you are 17 you ought to be in your 7th year. If you are in your 5th year you ought to be 15 years old. Smile

next your blood type is whether you are pure blood, half blood, muggle born etc. Other than that you are good to go! I will change your username

Posts : 3 Join date : 2014-09-02

Well, Well. Where could you possibly be heading to? mmmmmh

Gryffindor!!!!

Subject: Re: Ollie Firedrake's Introduction Wed Sep 03, 2014 2:59 pm

Welcome to Gryffindor! We hope you enjoy your stay here at Hogwarts!

I will add you to the Gryffindor group once your avatar will be changed ^^

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